Feedback from Ben Young from Teesside University

I have had some feedback on the concept and the video from Ben Young. A lecturer from Teesside University.

Ben had presented the idea of having a clear vision of where the narrative will be going within the music video; to make the narrative more clear to the audience and make the themes richer.  He also told to push my actress to produce  more confident performance.

I will be addressing these problems with my video and concept in reshoots and extra filming.